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The Doghouse
This could probably be notated better. In "celebration" of a missed (but not forgotten) anniversary.
You have too many barlines. It should be a barline for every two groups of four notes - 8 eighth notes to a bar.
Is this one you wrote yourself?
Thanks Nico. I will sort it out! :)
Yes, one of mine. Luckily it wasn’t the wedding anniversary.